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I see what you did there....

Someone has been playing Alan Wake hmmmmm? Anyway this was very good. Your art is gorgeous, the voice work was fantastic, and the animation was seamless. You did great on the lip-syncing especially, that must have taken forever. -_-

The one thing I noticed that seemed a little off was in the very beginning when they're standing in front of the bus stop, it seemed like they were two dimensional characters in a three dimensional space. Not bad but it did seem a little off. Perhaps something to work on in the future?

Also, did you make the bus in flash? Because if so, more congratulations are in order, that thing was beautiful. xD

Phenomenal!

This is a beautiful piece of work. The animations are all incredibly smooth. I love how each picture usually already looks like the object it becomes. The music work was great, very invigorating. My only complaint (barely one really) is that I feel some of the images changed a bit quickly, so I had a hard time grasping what an object was before it changed.

Thanks for putting this up and thanks for the idea of using morphs as an exercise. Maybe they'll help me improve my frame by frame a bit more. ^_^;;

Riveting

The art was amazing, the music a perfect match. everything fit together excellently. Extremely well written. The dialogue was simple yet brilliant, conveying a large amount of meaning or even malice in short phrases. I loved the switch of both characters and environments from deliciously creepy to playfully innocent and back again. Bravo!

Rehashed

There's nothing new here really. The avoid game has been done again and again in countless forms. Also the difficulty slopes very slowly. To end on a positive note however, everything was well drawn, flowed smoothly, and I enjoyed the musical pick. A for quality, just try to come up with an original idea. Even if it's not new gameplay-wise, an interesting story or characters can make a game. Good luck with future submissions. =]

Well

It's not bad for a beginner. Everything seemed to work, and that's obviously very important. However the biggest thing that I noticed, and something that's often overlooked, is to have your music match the style of game. People screaming the basic elements of trigonometry at you is not the sort of thing you need assaulting your ears as you attempt to run a cursor maze. Music does affect the way you play. Thus rushed music leads to a sense of urgency and rushed gameplay. In a cursor maze rushing is not what the player wants to do, and I can see this leading to a large rate of failure.
Seven is because everything works, and that's absolutely great for your first flash game. Good luck in learning more. =]

Haha Wow

An interesting concept you have here. The style of the song and the vocals in particular remind me of Gabby La La. She's also...odd. >.> Did you use a filter on your voice in this though? It doesn't sound quite like your other tracks. o.O

Holy juxtaposition Batman!

Ahhhhh. Pizzicato and bowed strings with an lower layer of electric bass and a drum kit? Bliss! Your voice is wonderful as always. The whole feeling of the song is seductive and very...chill. Bravo =]

Hmmmm...

This song....confuses me. I enjoyed it very much, but the feeling of it changes a lot for a minute and a half. It also sounded very much like game music to me.
I heard the introduction as an end screen for a Zelda-esque game ( I was actually picturing the game over screen from Ocarina of Time as I listened xD)
The middle (starting at approximately :34) reminded me very much of a backing track for a tense dialogue moment, perhaps where the characters are meeting the main antagonist for the first time, or have just lost a friend. Something like that.
Finally the end (beginning at around 1:12) felt almost like a bluesy, dingy city type song. With a bit more speed and some stand-up bass you could get a whole other song out of the last thirty seconds of this one.

As I said though, I liked it very much. My only real complaint is that it feels like you have the makings of an eight minute song (as far as mood and tone goes) crammed into a minute and a half.
Well done. =]

Grrrr

I give you very much grudging respect for this, as hands are the bane of my existence in art. It's well drawn, and everything is in the right place, but it seems as though it can't make up it's mind whether to be realistic or cartoony. I'm not sure which you were going for, but the lines on the palms, which stand out a bit more than they should i think, make it look more cartoony. Excellent work still though. =]

Gorgeous

You details don't cease to amaze. The fire rising up from orange knight's neck is not something you notice on the first look. =D I really enjoyed the individual characteristics, particularly blue and orange's more individualized (can be substituted with ridiculously awesome) getups. The greatest/most hilarious part about this drawing though has to be the fact that the focus of the thumbnail is directly on the girl's bosom *face palm* (yes I said bosom. It's a fantasy piece why not?). Excellent work over all. Keep it up. =]

Excellently Done

This is fantastic. From what I've seen of your art style it's very diverse that you can go from hardcore dragons to really nice peaceful scenes like this.
I like the blurry brushstrokes on the hat-ball and the hair, it's a very interesting look. The background looks a lot like watercolors, which is interesting, but confusing since most of your art that I've seen has been in photoshop or a similar program. This is no exception I'm assuming?